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Critique please? 
EDIT: Added an extra bounce!
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This is for a monthly challenge.
I wanted to do something that took more time but I just couldn't get myself to work on something really large since I'm working on another large project anyway. Also, I'm running out of time! D: If I didn't do this I don't think I'd have time for anything at all.
I thought this was also a good time to see if anyone could tell me what might make this a bit better. I'm trying to learn to make sprites and such but animation is a pain. Is there anything I could change about this? Its only four frames (1,2,1,3)
EDIT: Added an extra bounce!
400% Size
This is for a monthly challenge.
I wanted to do something that took more time but I just couldn't get myself to work on something really large since I'm working on another large project anyway. Also, I'm running out of time! D: If I didn't do this I don't think I'd have time for anything at all.
I thought this was also a good time to see if anyone could tell me what might make this a bit better. I'm trying to learn to make sprites and such but animation is a pain. Is there anything I could change about this? Its only four frames (1,2,1,3)
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Critique?
Well I notice two major problems:
1. it doesn't seem natural at all, she looks like a robot. Maybe she's even walking too fast.
2. the colours are really dull, they look washed out. It lacks the spark I often see in your works ^^
But then you said it's a first time, so it's not like can say: boooo this is bad lol!
You actually did a good job and I'm glad to see something more interesting than just a bunch of bouncing and eye blinking pixells ^^ (yes I'm just too fed up with those)
Well I notice two major problems:
1. it doesn't seem natural at all, she looks like a robot. Maybe she's even walking too fast.
2. the colours are really dull, they look washed out. It lacks the spark I often see in your works ^^
But then you said it's a first time, so it's not like can say: boooo this is bad lol!
You actually did a good job and I'm glad to see something more interesting than just a bunch of bouncing and eye blinking pixells ^^ (yes I'm just too fed up with those)